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November 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
well,here's hoping i dont have to abondon another fanfiction site because of petty jerks who think they have the right to decide what should or should not be written(well, those who aren't the owners f the site at least, cause i guess they kinda do.) its just to bad there is no way to report a person for harrasment, or for their reather crass and digusting reviews.... hope this doesn't get deleted, there are a few good stories left in this YAOI haven that i would hate to hav to give up on.
And i do enjoy your work!
And i do enjoy your work!
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November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really loving this. I will be keeping a close eye on future updates. Fantastic idea and great set up for amazing lemons. I hope Naruto gets to spend quality time with all the hot kunoichis, especially Tsunade, Tsume and Anko. FemMinato was hotter than I thought it would be, so I'm all for future genderbent kunoichi sexyness.
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November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Bless you! I don't know how many more yaoi, Anyone-other-than-Naruto-centric, or Naruto-is-cheated-on/betrayed fics I would be able to stand just seeing (cuz I damn sure don't read em) on this site.
You're the first in a LONG while to have
A) A Naruto-centric m/f fic
B) The reader doesn't need a decoder ring in order to understand what was written
C) More than one chapter
D) Chapters that are at least 1k words long, if not longer
I've been following this fic on ff.net. Glad to see it posted here because it makes me believe that I can expect more chapters from you.
You're the first in a LONG while to have
A) A Naruto-centric m/f fic
B) The reader doesn't need a decoder ring in order to understand what was written
C) More than one chapter
D) Chapters that are at least 1k words long, if not longer
I've been following this fic on ff.net. Glad to see it posted here because it makes me believe that I can expect more chapters from you.
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November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
One thing I've noticed is that more attention is given, detail-wise, to the genderbent characters.
The first chapter, you had Kushina fucked anally by Naruto while Mina took it vaginally.
This chapter Karui and Samui's experience at Naruto's hands weren't as much (details) as Omoi
If I remember write, it's the same in the next few chapters as well.
The first chapter, you had Kushina fucked anally by Naruto while Mina took it vaginally.
This chapter Karui and Samui's experience at Naruto's hands weren't as much (details) as Omoi
If I remember write, it's the same in the next few chapters as well.
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November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol @ the image of Naruto walking through the village and every so often making a clone to "take care" of a female that came up to, and on-to, Naruto.
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November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I vote for some Naruto/MILF interactions! And where is Kurenai? >.>
Can there be a scene where Naruto is, seriously, in a fight with an opponent and somewhere in the middle he decides to win the fight in a different way? Tsundere-type opponent would make for some hilarity
"Wha-wha-what are you doing!? Put your pants back....biiiig...GRRRR! Pervert don't think you can just...h-h-h-hey! Don't touch me there! Pervert! Idiot! Don't you dare believe I wont get reveNNNNNNNGGGGGEE!............................sooooo fullll....baka."
or something like that
Can there be a scene where Naruto is, seriously, in a fight with an opponent and somewhere in the middle he decides to win the fight in a different way? Tsundere-type opponent would make for some hilarity
"Wha-wha-what are you doing!? Put your pants back....biiiig...GRRRR! Pervert don't think you can just...h-h-h-hey! Don't touch me there! Pervert! Idiot! Don't you dare believe I wont get reveNNNNNNNGGGGGEE!............................sooooo fullll....baka."
or something like that