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July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. I hope you continue on with it. Can't wait to read more.
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March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love it. i noticed one or two mistakes but they were not major. i would love for you to continue this story.
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January 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading chapter 3 and absolutely love your story! I love how Naruto is slowly melting the dark, cruel and sadistic prince's heart! Really looking forward to your next chapter. Thank you for writing and sharing your story with us and hope you update soon! ! Happy New Year!!!
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December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story I can't wait to read more!! XD
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December 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have nothing to add. The 3rd chapter only proves my point, as Sasuke only turns to Naruto seeking comfort, pleasure, fun.
He sees Naruto purely as source of some entertainment. He pays attention to Naruto's problems only when they're in the way of having fun with the boy. That's it.
The episode with that crying potato was realy nice. Isn't it the image of his soul?
The pitiful, pained expression that haunts Sasuke had nothing to do with himself or his actions towards Naruto. Will he stop or regret if he's the one who cause it? Regrets spoil the pleasure, after all.
The memory of a torture with a hot poker mind me think of one episode of 'Slave Market' and 'For The Love of His Son', of course.
Personally, I don't believe that Sasuke's sudden attention to the slave is more than a whim. Some Naruto's emotions bother him. After all, it's hard to tease crying and distressed, sullen person. And sex with the person not in mood is so much like rape. AndSasuke can't let himself fall to that level. Purely out of pride.
Comforting Naruto with sex was easy because it's something Sasuke wanted and had planned to have from the beginning. Will he be able of something that goes against his selfish desires?
So far I see only one possible way of making them equal. It's if Naruto's powers make him a worthy ally and independent on his own. If he has something unique only he can bring to Sasuke and bargain with. Right now, it's only his life that is at stake. It's a normal situation and nothing much or special. He's defenceless, fragile and absolutely vulnerable, totally dependable on Sasuke's whims. It won't go further even if Sasuke falls in love with him.
Of course, the author knows better. It'll be interesting to read what's going to happen next. Thank you.
He sees Naruto purely as source of some entertainment. He pays attention to Naruto's problems only when they're in the way of having fun with the boy. That's it.
The episode with that crying potato was realy nice. Isn't it the image of his soul?
The pitiful, pained expression that haunts Sasuke had nothing to do with himself or his actions towards Naruto. Will he stop or regret if he's the one who cause it? Regrets spoil the pleasure, after all.
The memory of a torture with a hot poker mind me think of one episode of 'Slave Market' and 'For The Love of His Son', of course.
Personally, I don't believe that Sasuke's sudden attention to the slave is more than a whim. Some Naruto's emotions bother him. After all, it's hard to tease crying and distressed, sullen person. And sex with the person not in mood is so much like rape. AndSasuke can't let himself fall to that level. Purely out of pride.
Comforting Naruto with sex was easy because it's something Sasuke wanted and had planned to have from the beginning. Will he be able of something that goes against his selfish desires?
So far I see only one possible way of making them equal. It's if Naruto's powers make him a worthy ally and independent on his own. If he has something unique only he can bring to Sasuke and bargain with. Right now, it's only his life that is at stake. It's a normal situation and nothing much or special. He's defenceless, fragile and absolutely vulnerable, totally dependable on Sasuke's whims. It won't go further even if Sasuke falls in love with him.
Of course, the author knows better. It'll be interesting to read what's going to happen next. Thank you.
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December 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story!!!! So can't wait for more!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!!
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December 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and enjoyed reading the first 3 chapters. Your writing flows well and it's entertaining. I hope to read more soon. Thanks for writing and sharing.
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December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying Sasuke succumbing to Naruto's charm! Their joking over a potato was to cute:)
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December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this. Naruto's slowly changing the demon prince's heart!
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November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going to like this Demon Prince Sasuke! The harshness on the out side and the gooie softness inside:) Naruto whom I love dearly can't help himself talking back! I can't wait to see how you have the boys going at it verbally and in other ways ^_^