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for Feeding Frenzy

by EvilFuzzy

person Anonymous
schedule June 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn it. Update this shit!!!!!
person wyldshrike
schedule July 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You ever going to come back to this? I want to see what he does to Gato.
person kevin
schedule June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. Hoe about we add Tsume or Mei to the mix.
person Anon
schedule April 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter...keep up the good work.
person Akuma-Heika
schedule April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
never heard of inarizushi being liked by foxes but i have heard of the tofu myth concerning yoko. found it

will Naruto gain more power by eating other Jinchuriki?

so the Hyuuga got no boost?

will the clan heirs (and Tsume and Hana indirectly) become Naruto's slaves in time?

Hir? His+Her?

does Haku have pubic hair?
person kevin
schedule March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was just reading this chapter again an had a thought. What if Naruto made Haku a sort of priestess for a culd he would setup in Wave using the unhappy people of Wave and the orphans that Gato has produced. Also what if Sakure asked to be change into both male/female like Haku.
person kevin
schedule February 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just had a thought was Naruto's mom and Hinate's mom on the same team and was she not also friends with the Uchiha's mom also? With that being the case could he not also bring them back to life and what about Rin were they not on the same team? So many possibilities. But this was another excellent chapter. My suggestions were mearly some food for thought thou.
person Dracco
schedule February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Like the mind control aspect of the story, but the vore is kinda... stomach turning, just not for me. To each their own though. So, question: could you do a Mind control story like this minus the vore?
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but I've got to know... I need to know... Who is Naruto going to choose between Inari and Tsunami as his compensation sacrifice for Tazuna's lying about the mission's status? Is he going to choose the hot MILF, or the adorable little shota?

Or is he going to take the third option, screw over Tazuna, and take both.
person Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly
schedule February 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So what happens if he brings them back without eating them? Do they automatically become sacrifices? I think Sasuke and Sakura are not going to thanked when Naruto gets back with Haku and find out they've spit-roasted Zabuza. The cannibal aspects of Naruto I sorta dig but the other two just creep me out.