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December 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can we please turn this into a longer story?!? I'd love to see what happens when these two are alone together ;) pretty please??
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December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well written, nicely plotted, and absolutely charming...for a first story you did yourself very proud. I enjoyed reading it, and it made me smile. You kept your characters in character, even though this is A/U, and Kakashi and Naruto were fun to read and touching as well. Great job! Thanks.
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December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it. A bit over explanitory at times, but still good. The ending was really cute and funny and I like that Kakashi got bitch smacked too. Haha. If this really was your first, you did a wonderful job!