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for What These Eyes See

by Aysha

person 123rodx
schedule January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Read both chapter, love your story, great work
person mad bob
schedule January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
holy crap... that was awesome. i dont think ive ever seen a fic with hanabi as a main character. i cant wait to see where this goes
person KRP
schedule January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think that 'Older Sister' is supposed to be 'Oneechan' and 'Older Brother', 'Oniichan', although I think those meanings deviate slightly based on the suffix/honorific (-san, -chan, -sama, usually (in this case)) added on. There's also 'Aniki' for 'Older Brother', 'otouto' for 'younger brother' and 'imouto' for 'younger sister'.....

...And, that's starting to get a little off topic. Still, like the premise. For whatever reason, I've always kinda liked Hanabi, even if her character never really got fleshed out any. Maybe it's just because she's usually portrayed like a more serious Hinata?

Looking forward to more
ttyl
person Akuma-Heika
schedule January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So just like this evening I increased the flow of chocolate to my eyes and peered through the wall,
Normals use chakra hyuuga use chocolate! lol

WHen Hanabi says Onii chan who is she referring too?

I really hope for a NaruHinaHanabi or NaruHanabiMoegi!