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I would like to know.... who the hell Fauna was before her transformation into a girl? I can't seem to figure it out!

Something I forgot to mention before: if you want to be accurate with Lea's name it would be Lea Storm, not Storm Lea. The English translation of Rock Lee didn't switch the name around so it would be first name first instead of last name first. Though changing her last name from "Rock" to "Storm" is plain confusing since she's just a female Lee.

Also, you didn't have to change Ichigo's name to make him a girl. Ichigo is a multi-gender name, for a boy it means "One who protects" and for a girl it means "Strawberry."

Also... I think you might need a proof reader cause you used "swishing" instead of "squishing" here: "Kakashi spoke happily near the end, Naruto’s eyes widened before leaping for joy, the trio embrace each other in a hug, the two women swishing Naruto in a Bobbie sandwich, making Naruto cheeks feel hot before quickly hugging them back." Also... it's boobie not Bobbie..... Bobbie is a name.

Cool story, update soon I want to find out more of what naruto is going to do with his power and if sakura will make it to the top.