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for To Duel With Fate

by Mihkail

person Name
schedule November 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I keep coming back to this story and lovimg it more and more each time !! So beautifully writen and so very well planned. Please update soon !!

person Lilibet
schedule February 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was a powerful scene between Itachi & Sakura. You captured the complexity of their emotions perfectly. Can't wait to read more.
person Lilibet
schedule January 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update. These last two chapters were amazing! I love the depth of emotion seen in both Sasuke and Sakura; the anguish and love were quite raw. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the wonderful work.
schedule December 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. So well written and thought out! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
person Lilibet
schedule September 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sakura got through that dinner and Itachi didn't know that Sasuke was watching. Can't wait to see more.
schedule September 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. What is Sasuke planning? I think the Uchiha want Itachi to marry her. I love how you brought in and wrote Shisui.
schedule September 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! I don't know where to start... O.o I guess I just need this to soak for a while...
(THIS COMMENT WILL CONTAIN SPOILERS FOR THE 10th Chapter.)
Ehm... A little calmer, but only a little. Heh... those parts where Itachi asked about her weaknesses, that was evil! :D And the way he made her stay for a tea! Yay! I'm not going to write about how I felt about the porch situation cause I would be blushing too much. But the things he told her afterwards, it was SOO sweet! :) I just can't wait what happens between Sakura and Sasuke during the training, but I already know it'll be awesome! And awkward! And hot! (hopefully) But I kinda don't want her to do nasty stuff with him, although it would be fun to read at that moment it would also hurt Itachi too much. However if Sasuke attempted to rape her, that would bring back some of the darkness lingering in your story before your lustful Itachi melt our hearts. (At least mine.) Okay, this is going too far... -_- *feeling embarrassed*
But the very end surprised me, I really though that Itachi knew about Sasuke watching them. But he didn't. Oh well, this is going in all the right and wrong directions. I just hope that you have PLENTY of chapters prepared (in your head at least) because this story is simply addictive! I don't want it to end. :D
person Lilibet
schedule August 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating; I just love your story. I've been having a difficult week and reading your new chapter brought a smile to my face. Sakura always finds herself between a rock and a hard place. I can't wait to see what happens at the dinner table.
person Night.Being
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay! :D Me, again, annoying... I know. ;) But I just can't help it and review. This new chapter (9.) was SO DAMN GOOD! :D I'm sorry I snapped at you before, asking you to update when you were already working on this masterpiece. O:) I'm not going to repeat myself and drool over your writing abilities and stuff, that would take too much time. I know it takes time and inspiration to write something new, so I'll just sit here and wait patiently until a new chapter pops out. ;) Hopefully, I won't bite of my nails until then...
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You're evil. Oh, so much can go wrong here! I think Shisui's right, Fugaku and Mikoto will support them being together. I expected Itachi to become a growling possessive animal knowing Shisui's even been near Sakura. btw, I approve of the lack of Naruto, but I'd love to have more than just a mention of Kakashi, but that's because Kakashi is my other great love (besides Itachi and Sasuke). Great job! Continue soon, pleeeeeease!