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July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn! That was smoking hot! More plsease
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July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't surprise me if at the end the character was really Naruto in disguise. That'd lead to some interesting reactions.
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July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So Hana, Tsume, Hinata's Mother, either Hinata or Hanabi, Uchiha Mikoto, Uzumaki Kushina, Uzumaki Naruko(?), either Tayuya, Guren, or Kin from Oto, Konan, some civilians from the filler episodes or various foreign Kunoichi (Kurotsuchi, Temari, Shion, Koyuki, etc.), Mei Terumi and/or Tsunade, and others.
"Certainly looking good" is a bit of an understatement. :-P
"Certainly looking good" is a bit of an understatement. :-P
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July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I feel like this story could have been way better if this character was named naruto instead no last name. If its a alternate universe where naruto is just an orphan who became a massuese and entered konoha. As it is now i have no feelings for the main character and he cant pull you in as easily as naruto could.
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July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Naruto or/and Kushina next plz..
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July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Fem!Naruto or/and Kushina next plz..
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
glad to see another chapter of this
couldnt help but notice that Naruko will be here and im loving the list you got
chapter work well oon Kurenai seeign her break before Taki and using Anko to get her was well made plan , do love the sex part having good detail and the poses i imagined them quie good
thank h0ope to see next chapter gettign a mother and daughter combo
couldnt help but notice that Naruko will be here and im loving the list you got
chapter work well oon Kurenai seeign her break before Taki and using Anko to get her was well made plan , do love the sex part having good detail and the poses i imagined them quie good
thank h0ope to see next chapter gettign a mother and daughter combo
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work so far. Keep up the good work!
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is looking like it will be an amazing fic. I do have one request though, as I saw you had Kushina and her daughter here, can I ask that the daughter be her only child? I'd prefer a fem-Naruto to a male-Naruto existing in this story. Other than that, keep it up. I can't wait to see the next few chapters. Especially the Kushina one and the Naruko one.
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!(kicks Unikitty off stage) Damn cat-thing. Anyways...so glad you haven't abandoned this. Its really some good stuff and look forward to seeing more. This one seemed a little more fast paced then ch1 but digged the 3some. See ya on ch3.