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March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
very good premise , best he will break every kunoichi very soon with hsi skills
i recommend having Kurenai or Hinata but personally i would love to see Tsume
we need more Tsume and seeing him breaking her like a bitch in heat it will be wonderfull
style was also great seeign how Anko was broken
i recommend having Kurenai or Hinata but personally i would love to see Tsume
we need more Tsume and seeing him breaking her like a bitch in heat it will be wonderfull
style was also great seeign how Anko was broken
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March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. While I would like to see Sakura get her turn, I think the story would turn out better if she is in a later chapter. Though the mom and daughter would be a great way to bring her in. Before her, I'd like to see Tenten, Ino, Kurenai, Hinata or even Hanabi.
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March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really find this story enjoyable. I'd like to see Hinata getting off by this guy, she's my fav character and her shyness is really hot.
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March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I suggest Haruno Sakura :)
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March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A great story with great potential,very well written with a good buildup before the actual sex.
Anko is one of my favourite chicks,but I'd also like to see Ino or Kushina in the next chapters.Keep up the good work man.
Anko is one of my favourite chicks,but I'd also like to see Ino or Kushina in the next chapters.Keep up the good work man.
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March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the scenario, it is awesome. Feel like the 1st chapter needed an anal scene since it begin with Anko's ass. Maybe next chapter.
As for girl, could you go for Kushina or a mother/daughter duo like Sakura and Mebuki where one of them fall 1st(the mom) and then help Taiki break the other (the mom in a way betray and in the other teach the daughter the way of pleasure)
As for girl, could you go for Kushina or a mother/daughter duo like Sakura and Mebuki where one of them fall 1st(the mom) and then help Taiki break the other (the mom in a way betray and in the other teach the daughter the way of pleasure)
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March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far. Looking forward to much more.
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March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great job on the first chapter kind of wish there was a anal scene with anko but maybe in the next chapter. maybe the next girl could be tsunade and he will find out if she lives up to her name as the legendary sucker? have to wait and see. keep up the great work
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March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be great to suddenly 'find out' that Taiki is really Naruto mostly in disguise (except for his package...).
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March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see someone like Kurenai or Konan. Also, I want to mention that I'd prefer if Taiki isn't Naruto or any other established character. Keep up the good work.