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by MathiasBlue

person Quest
schedule January 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

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schedule January 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Long-Dick-Style!

person Anon
schedule March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Good story, not a fan of the piss-play, but it was warned. The ending was abrupt, but actually bringing something like this to a close is an impressive task in itself. good job overall.
person san
schedule March 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
dude when are you making the after story???? its been months now and nothing :( also are you going to be having naruto get all the women hes fkd pregnant and showing it?after all you alluded to him doing it to at least tsume and hana.... anyway plz let us know when your going to put out your afterstory to this have a nice day :D
person Sgt_Pepper
schedule January 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
out of the hundreds of fanfics ive read this might just be the best thing ive ever read 10/10
person Danglar
schedule December 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Consider killing yourself, you waste of space.
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really hope to see a NaruHinaHanabi 3some! Anything special about the end of your War?
person BigKahuna
schedule October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've been following the story since the beginning, and I want to say thanks for all the hard work, and for that satisfying ending. It kind of sucks that Hinata has to stay married, but all in all it was a good finale. I'm looking forward to reading more.
person Wyrtha
schedule October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The time line is shot to hell, but most dissapointing was that we didn't get to see any pups coming from those rapists. Would have loved the end to hold him smirking as he walked by Hana and Tsume looking sleep deprived and miserable as they looked after multiple sets of kids ... but maybe that'll happen in the after post. I'm also curious about whom else Naruto might knock up since he seems to get a kick out of that.
person RAWRWulf
schedule October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
While the ending was a bit weak, I'm just glad that you got around to finishing this. I do hope to see something about his Inuzuka spawn in the 'After Story'. :)