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That person who said that they would like Jiraiya to fuck Mebuki as a lesson to Naruto, I dont think that they chose Jiraiya specifically, anyone would be fine for that role, the idea was to make Naruto feel what It actually feels like to be on the other side. I sort of agree with that because even though the justification that Naruto gives is a valid one, its an entirely one sided decision and quite unfair to Shikaku who doesnt even know what is going through his wife's head, is it shikaku's fault for not realising it? yes it is, but isnt it Yoshino's job to point that out since a woman like would much rather keep her relation with her husband an honest. It becomes even more unfair because even if Shikaku tries harder from now on and brings some satisfaction to their sexual life, it wont be the level of naruto and Yoshino will always crave that and keep going back to Naruto which may leave shikaku bitter about it and somewhere down the line may become the cause for their marriage to fall apart. Yoshino made quite a rash decision( or a drunk one) if you look at it from a realistic point of view and it would be quite foolish of her to expect her husband to be fine with it, shikaku maybe lazy but this is a matter of their marriage and losing it before doing anything about it would be a stupid move from someone as smart as him. If Shikaku after this still doesnt do anything about it only then in my opinion would yoshino be justified with her decision other wise its a selfish one. In all honesty you should not have brought that kind of reasoning into the story since before this the cheating was still on a lighter tone because none of the other husbands were actually aware of the affair due to which readers(such as myself) didnt actually put any stock into the cheating justification. Its like saying since its anal sex, its not cheating. In a realistic world no one would think twice about yoshino's reasoning but call her a slut instead, because her actions were infact slutty, she put her need of sex above her relation with Shikaku. I feel like ive been going in circles with this review so I hope you got what Im actually trying to say, and sorry if i came off as ranting too much, looking forward to you next chapter. See ya!!

For fuck sake, if people getting cheated on bothers you so much, don't read the fucking story. It clearly says there will be cheating in the summary.

it seems to me like somebody is trying to direct you how to write

it seems they think that it is an ultimate justification to correct the way you write

just be on your guard lolz

Last bit had me in stitches. Probably the best story on the site.

I love how fast you update this story.

Ahh man, awesome chapter. Man that was mean tease ... was it's Naruto's after all, man I hope so. Sorry Kenji but I hope when that little bundle of joy comes out it has whisker marks and is a honey blond mixing Tsunami's and Naruto's hair colors along with his blue eyes.

Really looking forward to the Yoshino chapter although I do want to see him finally get back at the Inuzuka's and knock them up and to properly repay them for all they did to him. I'd also like to see him and get another visit from Kurenai that creates a different father for baby Asuma.

Darn Love this story. I'm hoping Naruto knock up several women before he gets back ... accidentally of course.

Can you imagine Mebuki's expression that after having sex with Naruto. She found Jiraya in her kitchen and he told her "Why don't you tell me exactly what you been teaching Naruto or you could tell Tsuande?" I wonder if Kizashi likes other guys fucking his wife. I can see Kakashi put Mebuki in a genjutsu and Inochi could always change her memories. I hope you have a Sakura and Mebuki getting fucked by Naruto as they press there pussies together or a Ino and Sakura one. Maybe a girls night with Hana,Shizune,Kurenai,Yugao,and Anko and they show a surveillance film with Mebuki and naruto and a short film with Naruto and Kurenai. I hope Naruto captures Hana and puts here in the breeding area of the veterinary clinic and gets her pregant.

I enjoyed that chapter amazingly thanks for your hard work in making "the secret technique". I know your not finished but I freackin love this chapter so DO YOU!!!!!

This story only gets better and better. Consistent updates and good writing. Looking forward to whatever comes next!