rate_review Reviews

Two things,

Having people in your story blow off Naruto not being a virgin and sleeping with older people in general ruins it. I assume the point of this story is to be somewhat kinky, I dunno why else he'd be banging older women almost exclusively. It's not that hot, or impressive, if everyone in the universe doesn't treat it like it's a big fucking deal - like they should. Shame, horror, incredulity, indignation, these are just some of the things people should be feeling when/ if they find out about Naruto and his dalliances.

Second, Naruto is big for his age, he's not hung yet. Having Tsunade think that she'd never been filled so much in her life by his cock, even if he's on the girthy side, is a bit of a stretch...

Hooray, the Tsunade chapter! A lot sweeter and more romantic than I was expecting, but thats actually kinda cool. After what happened, I wonder if she is gonna have a little Uzumaki while Naruto is away training.

Was really hoping he would deflower Hinata before he left.

great job on the new chapter I hope in the next one naruto has a go wit tsunade?

Finally, Like the way you portray the inner of Sakura in this intercourse. I like the way Naruto want to make her 1st time memorable and all and initiate a 2nd round.

Like the way you didn't make Sakura a dominant girl for Naruto too much, especially since it's her first time, inner or not.

I know you want a submissive Naruto cuz there is a lot of Dom Naruto fic out there but when it come to his interaction with Sakura, she's portray the dominant one most of the time .

Here's she was portray just as a pervy innner:P, which is great where Naruto show some lead by engaging 2nd round and Sakura engage the 3rd and so on. Having them try to outlast or outperform each other after the timeskip could be an idea.

Well Great chapter man :)

Man those two chapter were awesome, Love the 2 second Kurenai was struggling within herself and that genjutsu practie idea:P.

This is probably the best fanfic on this site. Keep it up.

Nice chapter, cant wait to see more.

Loving this story. Liking how you are moving around the events that I am pretty such everyone knows. Hoping that Tsunade is one of the women that Naruto gets with. Also, have you thought about addin this story to ficwad? Looking foward to reading more.

I'm waiting for the next chapter. Hope that she want as fast as possibe get pregant. I also hope you add tsunade and Yoshino nara. Yoshino must hornier than kurenai because of her husband with his speak of troublesome this and bla bla bla.