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Ah. That one review was written before reading chapter.
By the way, time-stop fucking sounds interesting, looking forward to it ))

I'd like to see Mebuki's feelings change over time, but either way this story rocks.

Love that chapter and how you setting up things in motion with Sakura little by little. That was an excellent use of her inner here. The lemon was awesome in this one. Do you plan to have Naruto have anal sex with Mebuki soon, after all, lesson 2 got Naruto playing with her ass and will mebuki come to see Naruto has more than just a toy for her sexual need.

Finally as much as I like this story, I almost wanted Kizashi dead cuz I kind of feel bad for him cuz it's like on of the few guy that respect Naruto in your story only to have Nauto fucked is wife. If he was an ass of something, no problem there but in this, he's just the gentle boring husband.I guess that is one face of reality :(. This chapter shows the conflict between Mebuki showing she still love him but it become boring overtime, it's real but sad.

Great quality of writing and you update faster than most and it still consistent and good:P. Can't wait to see what's next.

"but at least she had kept her ‘extracurricular’ fun to something not really human"
Oh really? It's either Uzumaki's healing bloodline or "not human". And since Mebuki is portrayed as someone smart and cunning, she should be able to understand that by now.

Well done. Good idea for the threesome of Naruto/Kurenai/Hinata. Kurenai can catch Hinata and corrupt her a little with a woman touch before setting a plan to get Naruto together.

Dooo it

I was kinda disappointed with chapter 7 and 8. But this chapter completely made up for it. 7 and 8 seemed rushed like you were just trying to get them out of the way and were very predictable. anyways great story keep up the good work, or not it's your choice. Oh please put this on fanfiction.net. please!

Another great chapter hope you add in one of the other umknown milfs like shikamarus mom :D

great job on the chapter and u should have kurenai catching hinata in the act while she is watching naruto. I will be looking forward to read the naruto kurenai hinata when ever u do that one. keep up the great work

love the 2 news chapter, reward time with Mebuki was great and maybe Sakura will be in that story after all so YEAH:) and I so hope in your sidestory arc that Naruto make Tsume and Hana learn that payback is a Biatch:P

Great chapters man, you work really fast and the quality of your writing doesn't drop so good work :). Love both idea for your next story but I would like to see A come to be 1st.