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March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
man what a chapter. and what a twist for hinata at the end. im so looking forward to the next chapter. maybe the next lucky girl could be kurenai? like say she was in the hotspring and hear some noise and when she looks she see naruto leaving the area thinking he was looking at her so she will teach him that being a pervert is very bad.
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March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of the Yellow Flash, it seems like Jiriaya could have corrupted Naruto durring the trip, making it more believable. Although, the other story does sound good to!
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March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I would like to reread about A.with sakura
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March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dreams.
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March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to vote for A: The fucking yellow flash and you did find a way for Sakura huh, that should be interesting to see how she gets pulled into this. And would make Naruto's day screwing not only the girl he's wanted all this time but her mother on top of it.
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March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hinata should be placed on naruto's team. after one very bad swoon makes her faint into a mud hole, Naruto should take her Mebuki to get cleaned up and when she sees Hinata almost come from Naruto asking if "she needs anything" from the other side of the closed bathroom door she decides training is needed and rationalizes it as keeping hinata from being killed
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March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Damn dude, you're a machine.
Never seen someone pump out chapters so fast.
Never seen someone pump out chapters so fast.
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March 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really nice chapter, love the idea to help him with the clone technique:P and how it build up little by little to the sex scene. It's really well done again
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March 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great fanfic you have here. Very well written and detailed. Any chance of Sakura joining in on the action between Mebuki and Naruto in the future? Also do have any other fanfics planed for the future? Keep up the awesome work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter one again. Just curious though will Mebuki ever accept Naruto as a human/fall in love with him? Or will he always just be her toy?