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You know you never actually wrote the NarutoxTsunade lemon. It was like a huge cocktease because you were about to do it but Naruto had to leave for his trip and promised that when he got back they would continue were they left off. Also can we please see more of Tsume and Hana as slaves? And Anko and Kurenai, i like those two.

Sad to see it end, but glad you finished it. I was hoping for another Ino or Sakura chapter. Especially Ino she's wench that begs to be dominated. I hope you might continue with your Harry Potter fic.

As a Naruto/Temari shipper, I really love this chapter. The sex was quite hot, especially when Naruto screwed Temari against the window or floor-to-ceiling window (or whatever that was). The encounter made me think Temari should dump Shikamaru and just stay with Naruto, given Yoshino warned Temari about the 'laziness' of Nara men. Yet if Temari does that, it will not fit with the theme of the entire fanfiction of Naruto bedding married women or women who have boyfriends. Regardless of the outcome of Temari's relationship, I hope to read more Naruto/Temari encounters in the future. ;)

So any other women planned to be seduce by Naruto? How about Tenten? Say she's dating Neji and found him boring, especially in the sack. Like Temari, she'll find out how great Naruto is as a lover, etc. ^_^

Nice chapter. I too love Shizune, and I sometimes think she would be ideal to take Naruto's virginity in canon. :)

BTW, I thought Naruto's cock is seven inches long according to previous chapters, not six inches.

Don't stop here, keep going. Don't let this story die. It's Awesome

The war, as stupid as it sounds, actually lasted only a couple days.

Yeah.

I love this story, can you another version of The Secret Technique in which Naruto is sleeping with Mikoto & Mebuki ? Make Mikoto the only one besides Sasuke to survive the clan.

Also do another story in which Naruto is sleeping with older women like Mikoto, Mebuki, Tsume, Yoshino, Kurenai, Anko, Hana, Yugao, Konan, Tsunade, Shizune, Mei Terumi,Tier Harribel, Nelliel Tu Odelschwanck and Kaguya.

Awesome job on this story! :)

Hey, is there any way I can contact you? I ask because I got some ideas for stories you might be interested in writing.

Wonderful to see you back continuing this series. Great scenes with temari this chapter. Nice and spicy at the end, please keep it up.

Glad to see you're still updating the story, I hope you do continue it. Anyway, i'm guessing with how you didn't even mention her during the summary of Pain's attack, no Konan? Bummer. With it being the right time frame I hope you include some Karui and Samui action, especially if you do end up with a somewhat cannon ending that has Karui marrying Choji while she continues to bang Naruto. Kaguya would be nice to see because of how rarely she's used, but I wouldn't be surprised if you just skimmed over her parts. I hope there's a little Naruto/Kushina but I think them just talking about their conquests would be funny too. Hope you enjoy you're time off and find time to continue this too.
Also the war lasted only 3 days, October 8-10th. Only. Three. Days. Wow.