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for The Secret Technique

by MathiasBlue

person Draco
schedule March 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Get chapter, I am always glad when I see that this story is being updated. Hey I have a quick question, can you right a small lemon for me? Its between Naruto and a female Itachi, where Naruto is like 16 and basically has his hormones take control and he has sex with Izumi, female Itachi. Please message me of you can, i would really appreciate it.
person Wyrtha
schedule March 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn good chapter. Although screw the consequesnces, especially if they actually like and want to bear his pups now. Who cares what the village thinks. He's the hero I'm sure they'd be happy to hear he has kids on the way and it's not like he's married or committed to anyone. Knock those .... up already. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person guisniperman
schedule March 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Exelent chapter. If you want a story idea, I have one. It's called the Breeder. Basically, all Kunoichi have to train in all aspect of seduction starting from the Academy. The story focus on the guy that train them in the art of making love. These lessons are always in effect and all Kunoichi can use a bit more practice. The fact Naruto's great in bed and make an exellent excuse to cheat on husband arnd boyfriend. All Kunoichi are required to procure their own contraceptives for there's no way the target is actually going to be considerate enough to care about that. This result in quite a few accidental pregnancy amongst the Academician and several not so accidental pregnancy with the singles or married Kunoichi. He has quite a few daughter running around and all the clan heiress and kunoichi are in fact his daugthers so incest abound. He's also required for the conversion of enemy Kunoichi and make them provide for the next generation. It's not quite dark as smutty and realist. Heck, with use of seals and Uzumaki long life Naruto could be the father of Anko and still look like a straping young twenty man. Seals also explain why he can only conceive girls by supressing his X cromosome and why the girls don't look like him. It's perfect and smutty as hell and full of 'situations' a Kunoichi could end up in like anal training for the targets that like boys as well as henge training for the sickos that like younger children.
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fanfiction, but can you do one with Naruto is not only paired with Mebuki, but Tsume, Hana, Anko, Kurenai, Konan, Mei Terumi, Tsunade, Shizune, Yugao, & Kaguya Otsutsuuki ? That would be awesome.
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Will Hinata whore out her "husband" to his sex slaves lol. an eye for an eye, an ass for an ass lol.
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far keep the chapters coming!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Hope to see mrs. Yamanaka soon and also to see when yoshino tells her so called husband that she wasn't bluffing evt. divorce from him. I also hope to see other too one for excample mei. But this is up to you.

Btw wish you happy holidays.
person PillPushr
schedule December 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
While I am happy you finally posted another chapter, I can't wait to see Shikaku's reaction to Yoshina calling his bluff. I also hope you get around to updating Demon's Dirty Dreams as I can't wait to see what happens to Gato, and who Naruto may sleep with in Wave. I am sure he would return most of what Gato stole, yet keep some items for himself to support his future goals. I can only hope your muse kicks in for these stories as it has for your Harry Potter story.
person NaruAnkoNut
schedule December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great to see you back, man. Hope your hand mends quickly.
person Wyrtha
schedule December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see a new chapter of this wonderful story. I hope the next chapter finds the Inuzuka's equally pregnant with Naruto's child and trying to hide or explain it.

Although sad about what's happening to Hinato although glad she and Naruto have a plan. Although I was hoping he would knock her up as well and force her clan to stop what they're planning. I mean I doubt the Hokage would allow them to seal Hinata or her grandbabies. Still though the plan is good and knocking her up after she's married could be fun.