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Mebuki - Definately For The Next Chapter. Good Story By The Way

Amazing stoey

Fucking awesome; loving the fic and I'm ecstatic that you're back writing it.

tsunade encore? please?

Glad to see a new chapter of this awesome story which is one of my favorites. As for your conundrum I don't see why you can't do both similar to this chapter. Maybe a quickie with Mebuki to start it off and then go indepth with Hinata and what happens with her.

All that I got to say I'm waiting for Hana/Tsume to turn up pregnant ... which would be great. Although I'm also hoping that Naruto finds another one to do what he did to them again ... perhaps Karui/Samui ...but I know that's far away. I'm also hoping that Temari will show up again soon after maybe Yoshino talks with her about her own crappy deal with a Nara male.

He's going to have those bitches BEGGING to be bred...

Amazing chapter, as per usual. You really are a master of degradation.

I can't stand this cocky self righteous piece of shit. To have sex with married women while consciously knowing you're fucking up a marriage is what defines an asshole. Who gives a fuck what Naruto views marriage and that morality is stupid in his line of work. The fact is that he's ruining someone else's life all to satisfy his needs and women. Narutos main argument is that if the man can't satisfy his mate then she has the right to go find someone else to do the job. What about the man? What if it was the other way around? Naruto doesn't give a shit about the man in the marriage because he's the only one who gains everything if he feels the woman can seek others to satisfy her if the man can't. Like I said, self righteous piece of shit.

On the subject of time hopping, it might be cool to see an epilogue to all this; maybe somewhere years down the line. Naruto was so concerned about his children being abused, it'd be deliciously ironic if they're loved far too much instead. I could just see him learning from Hana that Tsume's son had recently planted one inside her... and she couldn't be happier.

Mebuki chapter.

i am hapy to know that you are fine now, i tink yo sould do hinata next my broter and his friend think the same Thanks