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June 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story man i hope to read more soon though i also wish to speak to you about something so drop me an email at spartin2211@verizon dot net.
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June 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great as always. Your chapters are always well written, and of a chunky, satisfying length. I know it is a Mebuki focused story, but I do wish there was a little more Anko in there, now that Naruto is all grown up and more dominant.
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June 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great job on the new chapter I hope its ino next or after she has a talk with sakura. or what about ino catch's naruto again but this time with tsunade and could be screwing her in her office. have to wait and see who is the next lucky girl. keep up the great work
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June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I saw go for Ino next as it would be the next thing logically as you can have her confront Sakura about it and during that talk maybe Ino starts getting a bit turned on and could ask Sakura if she minds if she takes a shot to see what Naruto is like. Plus with this you can lead up into a Naruto/Sakura/Ino threesome. It would create some nice solid flowing and you can also use these chapters to help set up future things as well.
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June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
How about a troublesome twosome chapter. Ino and Yoshino at the same time. Notice how ino is part of Yoshino's name. A little revenge on each girls part. To spend time with someone, who does not treat them as troublesome.
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June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's faint not feint, as in:
She is fainting, she fainted etc.
Kinda important considering it seems like Hinata will be a recurring character.
She is fainting, she fainted etc.
Kinda important considering it seems like Hinata will be a recurring character.
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June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yet another amazing chapter, though I think an opportunity was missed as you could've fit both Tsunade and Sakura in there.
I definitely like Sakura in your story, as she's more worried about her good friend Naruto, as opposed to canon Sakura, who still wasn't sure who's side she'd take in a confrontation, as far as Naruto and Sasuke.
If you take reader's votes into consideration, definitely Yoshino. Though this chapter also got me thinking of Tsunade again.
I definitely like Sakura in your story, as she's more worried about her good friend Naruto, as opposed to canon Sakura, who still wasn't sure who's side she'd take in a confrontation, as far as Naruto and Sasuke.
If you take reader's votes into consideration, definitely Yoshino. Though this chapter also got me thinking of Tsunade again.
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June 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I should have known it was Hanabi by the title ... got to wonder if Hinata was watching and what she thought. Looking forward to the next chapter although a bit sad that Hinata's chance won't be coming, but it is understandable. Actually waiting makes more sense until the Pain chapter.
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June 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I actually like this story but I would like read more with Naruto and Moegi and Sakura heck how bout next chapter where Naruto has sex with both Sakura and her mom at the same time
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June 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this is one erotic - and at the same time, fucked up - fic. Well written, very neat premise, and kinda sad too. Mebuki is a little nuts, but you write her so well. The characters are as IC as you can make them (given that this is a lemon fic; I doubt Tsunade and Shizune would compare notes on how good a lover Naruto is), and the chapters are decent length.
I congratulate you sir; this is one hell of a fic. Excellent.
I congratulate you sir; this is one hell of a fic. Excellent.