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I've noticed a consistent grammatical error that keeps popping up in every chapter, you use 'sat' in places where 'sitting' would be more appropriate, it is an informal version in some english dialects, and not really something that should be used in written form. sat should only be used in past tense, the present participle sitting would often be more appropriate, also when you use sat in this context one might also think that you are using a passive verb instead.

Here are two examples from this chapter:
to see Sakura sat at the kitchen table - to see Sakura sitting at the kitchen table
until she was sat on him - until she was sitting on him

I'm not sure why Naruto's features are described as being more delicate, especially compared to Sasuke, which doesn't really fit with the visuals in the anime in my opinion, is it just so that he comes across as more vulnerable or something?

I remember precisely on a piece of paper I wrote my size changes. I still have it infact.
12-5'2
Considered above average for that age.
If I'm a human with an above average cock, Naruto should have 5'5.

Nice chapter as usual.

Once again you've produced an excellent chapter. However I was wondering if you would consider adding Ayame and or one of the filler princesses from the show to your fic?

Another fantastic chapter as always I must say. I quite enjoyed this chapter as many others did as well. Near the end I had an idea. Mebuki has a cheating fetish....so why not have Moegi have something similar? Such as have a Naruto/Moegi chapter where she thinks she is better than mebuki even doing it in her apartment....just a thought is all~ And I hope you do well on your exams. Good luck.

Any chance of some movie girls coming in? Like Koyuki or Shion

I'm curious as to whether or not Tsume and Hana will realize that they sexually abused a child. I'm not sure if they'd feel bad about it anymore seeing as he's returning the favor twice over.

Great chapter regardless!

Are we going to get anything with Hinata?

I hope Hinata was watching the inuzuka situation from next door and eventually Naruto has them service Hinata as well