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April 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful. Sad and heartbreaking, but beautiful nonetheless. It certainly tore through my emotions and made me cry. I hope you continue this. This has the potential of being a good multi-chaptered story.
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for sharing.
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April 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I pray that this isn't just a one or two shot. I love this story so far, it's such a tear jerker. You made me cry thought this whole chapter. Reading how things have changed between them, how making love was now just empty. How Naruto now feels like a meaningless fuck. But over all, how after everything Naruto still loved Sasuke. After everything Naruto was willing to look in the other direction, to forgive and forget, just as long as Sasuke still loved him. It just took 3 little words, 3 simple words. But even that was asking too much. I cried so much, but I'm proud of Naruto. He didn't beg, he didn't cry in front of Sasuke, he didn't trash everything around him. He just walked away. I can only hope that if I'm ever in his position, god forbid, that I can be as strong and do the same as him. That I too, can just walk away and let go. Don't ever let them see you cry.
I can't wait to read your next chapter. I want to know why, Why things are this way. I want to know what changed, how made Sasuke do this, when he loved Naruto. What could possibly be his reason, cause no matter what it is, it's not good enough. He threw away something worth a lot more then he got. Was it worth it for him? But most of all, I want to see what will happen when he finally comes home. Will he even care? I have a feeling he will. In fact I have a feeling Sasuke's chapter will be something like "No Light, No Light By Florence + The Machine". Honestly it's perfect for that chapter. I can't wait to read more. I hope sasuke still loves Naruto an is willing to get him back.
Amazing story, I wait on baited breath for more. =D
I can't wait to read your next chapter. I want to know why, Why things are this way. I want to know what changed, how made Sasuke do this, when he loved Naruto. What could possibly be his reason, cause no matter what it is, it's not good enough. He threw away something worth a lot more then he got. Was it worth it for him? But most of all, I want to see what will happen when he finally comes home. Will he even care? I have a feeling he will. In fact I have a feeling Sasuke's chapter will be something like "No Light, No Light By Florence + The Machine". Honestly it's perfect for that chapter. I can't wait to read more. I hope sasuke still loves Naruto an is willing to get him back.
Amazing story, I wait on baited breath for more. =D
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March 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It seems interesting. I look forward to reading sasuke's point of view. I hope we will be able to see Naruto move on to a different relationship with someone who doesn't take him for granted, i suppose.