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May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
you know, I just realized, that part where Sakura says "I, SAKURA HARUNO, AM A CONVENIENCE CUNT THAT’S OPEN FOR USE ALL THE TIME! EVERYDAY I WORK HARD TO BE A CUM DUMP! SO PLEASE USE ME AS MUCH AS YOU WANT!" is also from a doujin I've read tons of times
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May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Found this fic when I read the lewd New World omake that EvilFuzzy9 wrote. Love it. Can't wait to see what you do with it next!
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April 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, this was a very flattering, very good, and VERY arousing homage. It'd be interesting to see where the story would go if you continued it, but even as just a stand alone one shot it is quite enjoyable. :)
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April 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Why not use a lot of the girls that aren't seen outside of fillers? I wouldn't mind seeing one of the Iwa Bee ladies or Snow village women being used. Go out on a limb and try some different ones out and if you want/need an idea, let me know.
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April 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that for the first chapter its good and hope u continue the story. how about naruto does hinata and kurenai in the next chapter?
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April 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ok Ive read the few others like this and i think i prefer this one better than the others as it doesn't try to follow cannon that closely so i hope that you continue this and expand as i would like to see more of them in their day to day routine and this is just a suggestion but try to make it a little different by kepping a few more male characters around or explain why there is such a difference in male/female ratio
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April 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
how about the other Tail Beasts becoming humanoid?
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April 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start to a good fic. I would definitely like to see more.
Scenario suggestion: Ino, Temari, and Tsunade are having debate about who the sexiest blonde is and Naruto arrives before using his sexy no jutsu to show them he is the best.
Scenario suggestion: Ino, Temari, and Tsunade are having debate about who the sexiest blonde is and Naruto arrives before using his sexy no jutsu to show them he is the best.
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April 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed it and i would love this to be more than just a one-shot but good job on it anyway
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April 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice so far a lot different from the others though if mina was alive how come the 3rd was hokage and not mina? or did she even become the hokage I wonder if naruto becomes hokage will he change the rule instead of a kiss to the butt a kiss to his cock or to suck him off....