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for The More Things Change

by Sushi4Brains

person satan
schedule May 18, 2020 at 12:00 AM

awesome

person v
schedule June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You're so horrible...and wonderful...amazing...inspired...did I saw horrible?!..such a cliffhanger!lol
person v
schedule June 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Its sooooo hard waiting for the next chapter. I love this storyline! what will happen??!! Poor Tenzo!lol
schedule May 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely amazing and well-written story. The plot has enough action and suspense in it to keep you on the edge of your seat, making you wonder what will happen next. Mixed into the story are sections of Yamato's/Tenzou's thoughts, feelings, and reflections which provide the story with an extra layer of plot and interest. This story is probably one of the best written Kakashi/Yamato stories I have read. This paring is also one of my favorites. I certainly look forward to your next update!

ferret nin
person v
schedule May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
....yes..fun stuff...how wonderful...such a cliffhanger!! Love it :)
person v
schedule April 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Edge of my seat...bated breath...smacking head on table...I'll stay like this until the next chapter..lol
schedule April 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
God, you're such a tease. I was hoping this chapter would finally be the meaty bit, but you just tantalize until I burst! Grrrr... I feel for Tenzou in the fact I'm being tortured as much as he is, waiting for it to happen. You better update soon (that's rich coming from me). It's excellently well done. I absolutely love the two sides to Kakashi.
person v
schedule March 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this, your writing is so expressive, as I'm reading I can practically feel the tension and suspense. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. The very best pairing or tripling (lol) of these two I have read. Thanks so much!
schedule February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm dying here! I reread it all and then it stopped again! I can't wait for the litany of questions and Yamato's reluctant answers or/and his punishment. Is it terrible that I want him to break? I think Kakashi will patch him up after Hound destroys him.
So good, so well done.
schedule April 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! Why it stop?! You're as sadistic as Kakashi!!!!
Wonderful story by the way. I love Yamato's POV and inner thoughts. The only thing is, at the beginning of the story, before you mention it's Tsuande, I thought this was pre-Team Seven and this was a much younger Yamato. A little heads up on the fact this is not fifteen year old Yamato is the only complaint I have. It's a wonderful story and I love the style. Totally in love with it. And you taught me two new words: strop and tawse. For that alone, I thank you.