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April 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
be a cool story but no formatting, you have a wall of words that makes your story impossible to read
schedule
April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I had issues reading this fic because of what I think is a formatting error on AFF. For some reason, random spaces got turned into returns and caused sentences to be broken up into multiple lines.