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Loved,this very much..well written, in depth..you could feel Naruto's and Sasuke's pain radiating from the pages..I'm so glad Sakura didn't get away with her perfidy..Jealousy is an ugly emotion. Thanks for the beautiful story..

This was a great story...well written, filled with angst and a surprising twist..you captured the anguish people go through when an especially intense relationship ends unexpectedly...and I'm glad Sakura is paying for her misdeeds...I especially like the fact that Naruto was able to pull himself together..great story..good job!

I avoided reading this story for a while due to the description, and broke down only because I like your other work. I have to say that I'm stunned. It was an uncomfortable read in places, but the content was far from the random freak-outs for the sake of angst that one often sees. The payoff in the end is big, building an entirely different character dynamic with different emotional experiences than the characters ordinarily afford. With, perhaps, even more intensity.

I. think the biggest surprise, though, is that the journey the characters take touched a real personal chord with me. Hotness aside, I have some real thinking to do about my own life after having read this. Writing a work that resonates with your readers on a deeper level while pretending to write smut is an accomplishment that you should take real pride in. You have managed to chip off a little sliver of real humanity and infuse it into your characters, on a stage ordinarily occupied with wooden puppets. Bravo.

Wow! Just spent the weekend reading this. Loved it!! The characterisations were perfect, and I loved the storyline. It was romantic, but it showed some real-life understanding about what it take to keep a relationship strong. I look forward to reading more of your work.

omgggg you write amazing smut! I so wish this story wasn't over! Would love to see a follow up, with them adopting a kid!

aww i loved this story im happy that things worked out and that there is a child in there future.
great job and please keep up the good work on other stories

I really enjoyed your fic! To be honest, I didn't think that I would. I generally don't like fics that are too angsty. Your story was a perfect blend of love and hate! When you began writing of how Sasuke was treating Naruto, I thought that there was no way to redeem him. However, Naruto found a way to forgive him, and I did too. The sex scenes were top-notch, too. Thank you for sharing your fic with us!

aw man! the end??
....is there going to be a sequel?
I was curious to see if and how the relationship between hinata/itachi and sakura/lee would develop. I also got really excited with the mention of adopting. I'd love to see the kid they would adopt.
oh well....fantastic story! I really enjoyed it

please plasee update again soon !!!! i love this story and am drooling at what is to come! please please update again soon

ah!! it has happened ....well, at least it will happen. I look forward to the next chapter! (just to let you know-there are doubles of what you wrote in this chapter. like you read the chapter and then the same chapter is right below your warning of 'hard yaoi' coming up).

now, I am off to read your other story on ff.net. I can't believe they took it down....so strange. I'm curious what the complaint was.....about the reviews? I don't really understand why that would warrant the story being taken off.