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April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So why did they take down Nice Guys Finish Dead Last... and I finshed reading this on ff.net I have to say you are one of the most amazing writers that I have ever had the pleasure of reading material from. This story made me bawl like a little girl it was crazy. Thank you for such a great story. If you want to reply back to me my email is on this as well
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April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love love loved this chapter.
Everything meshed so well, their self-explanation of those emotional trauma, their reactions together. It's all the thoughts and little personal tidbits that I as a reader really appreciates cause it makes the story that much more realistic and enjoyable. I don't know what else to say i just loved everything! I liked Naruto's independence and i now feel like Sasuke deserves to get screwed to high heaven for his patience has paid off. Can't wait for it :D
Sucks balls about the other story getting taken down. And i totally had it bookmarked too!! Dont let a silly complaint get you down oh great Kami-sama!!
I shall wait patiently until ur next update,
Cheers
Everything meshed so well, their self-explanation of those emotional trauma, their reactions together. It's all the thoughts and little personal tidbits that I as a reader really appreciates cause it makes the story that much more realistic and enjoyable. I don't know what else to say i just loved everything! I liked Naruto's independence and i now feel like Sasuke deserves to get screwed to high heaven for his patience has paid off. Can't wait for it :D
Sucks balls about the other story getting taken down. And i totally had it bookmarked too!! Dont let a silly complaint get you down oh great Kami-sama!!
I shall wait patiently until ur next update,
Cheers
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April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
kami-sama!!! thank you for granting me the privilege of reading another chapter.
i'm reviewing again simply because i am shamelessly hooked.
throughout this chappie it's clear you've gone back to establishing where they both stand emotionally. like addressing the root of the problemo and though for me, reading about their deep thoughts on their respective other halves was painful it HAD to be done and hashed out in order for them both to reach that miraculous compromise (that we're still eagerly waiting for). But now i know that they're heading definitely toward reconcile, like i can practically imagine them renewing their vows...
Cheers to Naruto who amply said that he didn't want to give up on them just yet! Like thank gods!! You will make a great seme out of him yet! And sympathies to Sasuke who has still to prove his integrity to Naruto the last hurdle in my opinion.
and omfg shit just hit the fan ItaHin never saw that coming
ps loved the little tidbits of Sasuke having his Naruto dreams and when he sinks back into being possessive and adoring Naruto in the work place
Keep up the good work, as you've figured out by now i shall be shamelessly stalking your story!!
i'm reviewing again simply because i am shamelessly hooked.
throughout this chappie it's clear you've gone back to establishing where they both stand emotionally. like addressing the root of the problemo and though for me, reading about their deep thoughts on their respective other halves was painful it HAD to be done and hashed out in order for them both to reach that miraculous compromise (that we're still eagerly waiting for). But now i know that they're heading definitely toward reconcile, like i can practically imagine them renewing their vows...
Cheers to Naruto who amply said that he didn't want to give up on them just yet! Like thank gods!! You will make a great seme out of him yet! And sympathies to Sasuke who has still to prove his integrity to Naruto the last hurdle in my opinion.
and omfg shit just hit the fan ItaHin never saw that coming
ps loved the little tidbits of Sasuke having his Naruto dreams and when he sinks back into being possessive and adoring Naruto in the work place
Keep up the good work, as you've figured out by now i shall be shamelessly stalking your story!!
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April 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if my first review actually went through so i shall review once more.
I absolutely love this. Seriously i might just forget to breathe and die because of all the anguish i'm feeling right now. Yes i know you warned us and i thought i could deal but you've given me such anxiety the only way you can make up for it now is to write and post more chapters otherwise i shall not be at ease.
I'd like to point out a few things. First off, i love the method you used to tear Naruto down and to recreate a stronger Naruto. This I feel puts Sasuke in a unique position because not only does he have to overcome his still wounded emotions he has to do so knowing that he put Naruto in a living Hell. Sasuke is forced to reevaluate where he stands because he wasn't cheated on and he did act like a total bitch. Knowing this my mind reeling, i have no idea how you're going to make them crumble deliciously back into the lovey-dovey relationship that they are meant to have. And as a reader i find this absolutely thrilling.
their relationship dynamic is incredibly appealing because its broken, and now hanging on threads and potentially close to a miraculous amends.
and i don't care how cliche a happy ending is, I need this to have a happy ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
maybe Naruto forgives Sasuke after several rounds of therapeutic BDSM where Sasuke has to completely trust his lover... or maybe Sasuke maybe in danger somehow and Naruto must rescue his damsel in distress and in a cruel twist Sasuke potentially sacrifices himself for Naruto and they reconcile becasue it is true love... or maybe Sasuke will tell Naruto that its his choice and he'll have to deal whatever Naruto chooses and after Sasuke has completely given up hope Naruto chases after him and tadaaa happily ever after
I also believe that the story is plausible, counter to a specific UFO's belief, mostly because I am a Sasuke fangirl and this is a fanfiction, and also because in the Orginal story itself Naruto, as a child then as an adolescent, chases after Sasuke even though its extremely detrimental to his health, i.e. Sasuke was totally gonna kill him... but Naruto chased after his friend, and this is in a way a parallel to that danger and thus the dramallama created becomes totally plausible. Although the only thing that may be implausible is the timeframe spent apart, i feel that 2 years is just 2 years too many to keep them apart. IT freaking broke my heart when i read it was ''two years since''. I literally was gapping WTF and i cried, i really did.
And also please let my Sasuke get tested and not have STDs, i felt like that was an utterly low blow by Naruto, while warranted though, i can practically feel the sting on Sasuke's face cause it must literally be a slap in the face to have someone you love think that you're that dirtied.
Anyways...
i cannot wait to read you're next chapter. No pressure or anything but I need to read it!!
Happy writing kami-sama
I absolutely love this. Seriously i might just forget to breathe and die because of all the anguish i'm feeling right now. Yes i know you warned us and i thought i could deal but you've given me such anxiety the only way you can make up for it now is to write and post more chapters otherwise i shall not be at ease.
I'd like to point out a few things. First off, i love the method you used to tear Naruto down and to recreate a stronger Naruto. This I feel puts Sasuke in a unique position because not only does he have to overcome his still wounded emotions he has to do so knowing that he put Naruto in a living Hell. Sasuke is forced to reevaluate where he stands because he wasn't cheated on and he did act like a total bitch. Knowing this my mind reeling, i have no idea how you're going to make them crumble deliciously back into the lovey-dovey relationship that they are meant to have. And as a reader i find this absolutely thrilling.
their relationship dynamic is incredibly appealing because its broken, and now hanging on threads and potentially close to a miraculous amends.
and i don't care how cliche a happy ending is, I need this to have a happy ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
maybe Naruto forgives Sasuke after several rounds of therapeutic BDSM where Sasuke has to completely trust his lover... or maybe Sasuke maybe in danger somehow and Naruto must rescue his damsel in distress and in a cruel twist Sasuke potentially sacrifices himself for Naruto and they reconcile becasue it is true love... or maybe Sasuke will tell Naruto that its his choice and he'll have to deal whatever Naruto chooses and after Sasuke has completely given up hope Naruto chases after him and tadaaa happily ever after
I also believe that the story is plausible, counter to a specific UFO's belief, mostly because I am a Sasuke fangirl and this is a fanfiction, and also because in the Orginal story itself Naruto, as a child then as an adolescent, chases after Sasuke even though its extremely detrimental to his health, i.e. Sasuke was totally gonna kill him... but Naruto chased after his friend, and this is in a way a parallel to that danger and thus the dramallama created becomes totally plausible. Although the only thing that may be implausible is the timeframe spent apart, i feel that 2 years is just 2 years too many to keep them apart. IT freaking broke my heart when i read it was ''two years since''. I literally was gapping WTF and i cried, i really did.
And also please let my Sasuke get tested and not have STDs, i felt like that was an utterly low blow by Naruto, while warranted though, i can practically feel the sting on Sasuke's face cause it must literally be a slap in the face to have someone you love think that you're that dirtied.
Anyways...
i cannot wait to read you're next chapter. No pressure or anything but I need to read it!!
Happy writing kami-sama
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April 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I have to see more of this! I love LOVE this story! I feel so bad for them and want them to reconcile so much! Please update soon!
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April 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG all these feels!! It's too much!! You rock, please pretty please update soon!!
i'm going loco thinking about poor Sasuke and Naruto's love life.
i'm going loco thinking about poor Sasuke and Naruto's love life.
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April 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I wonder how everything will turn out.
I'm not sure, after how cruel sasuke was, that anyone would forgive him and get back together with him. Then again...this is naruto. He is a forgiving soul.
Ah! I'm torn between wanting sasuke to suffer for his irrationality by losing naruto and wanting naruto and sasuke to be happy together.
I'm really glad to have come across this story. It's been a while since I have a naruto story this engaging and well written.
I'm not sure, after how cruel sasuke was, that anyone would forgive him and get back together with him. Then again...this is naruto. He is a forgiving soul.
Ah! I'm torn between wanting sasuke to suffer for his irrationality by losing naruto and wanting naruto and sasuke to be happy together.
I'm really glad to have come across this story. It's been a while since I have a naruto story this engaging and well written.
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April 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! I can't wait to see what happens next. I feel sorry for Naruto, but even so, I can't really blame Sasuke for what he did. I feel that in a situation such as this I would have done the same.... Well, without the sleeping around part. But he has always been such a sensitive person. This role fits him. Keep writing ;)
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April 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I hope to read more soon.
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April 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i knew Sasuke could be a bastard but what he did was just wrong . after reading the last 4 chapters I'm hoping naruto ends up with Yahiko he deserves to be happy. if Naruto and Sasuke end up back together again love to know how Sasuke plans on it