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May 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. Loved the hypnotic ability of the smoke. I'm guessing Kin is next, love that he has a maid now. At some point he's going to get a house ... and maybe sell some of his collectibles.
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May 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Alright, kinky chapter.
I have a few questions : how will Naruto manage to become Hokage without a moral compass? It'd pretty much put him on the same level as Danzo morally, and we both know it wouldn't really help him.
Also, I find myself wondering exactly how old the characters are. I mean, the time period would hint at them being 12/13, but you mentionned Hinata's hair being splayed on the pillow, and Naruto seemed to be the same height as Tsunami, and that would imply that they are older. Clarify plz?
Next, after Hinata's match with Neji, why not have Naruto find a way to heal her (maybe with Kurama's help?) and then, aroused by the place his hand is (on her chest, obviously) he decides to take a little payment for his service, and use the smoke on her again. Only, this timehe uses it like on Tenten and decides to ask her who she loves, to know who he's stealing her from. Just a suggestion though.
I left my e-mail if you want to talk ^^
I have a few questions : how will Naruto manage to become Hokage without a moral compass? It'd pretty much put him on the same level as Danzo morally, and we both know it wouldn't really help him.
Also, I find myself wondering exactly how old the characters are. I mean, the time period would hint at them being 12/13, but you mentionned Hinata's hair being splayed on the pillow, and Naruto seemed to be the same height as Tsunami, and that would imply that they are older. Clarify plz?
Next, after Hinata's match with Neji, why not have Naruto find a way to heal her (maybe with Kurama's help?) and then, aroused by the place his hand is (on her chest, obviously) he decides to take a little payment for his service, and use the smoke on her again. Only, this timehe uses it like on Tenten and decides to ask her who she loves, to know who he's stealing her from. Just a suggestion though.
I left my e-mail if you want to talk ^^
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May 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, thanks for the update.
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May 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit Naruto captured Kin and had his way with Tenten. Looks like Naruto has gotten his maid. You know there was a fic around here that had Naruto getting Kin and Tayuya as his maids, shame I can no longer find it. I loved team 7's reactions to Naruto's night with Tsunami. I can't wait for the next update.
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May 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait to read how things change with Naruto having nothing holding him back now.
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May 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Revenge on Tenten for being a bitch! Love it! Soon Kin will be next. Make her the sexy slutty maid of his rich little hideout. LOL! Also, have Naruto take pictures of Tenten while she is playing with herself just because...well because he can. LOL!
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May 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dude awesome chapter love they way naruto can sort of mind control them cant wait to see him making kin and tayua his maids/sex slaves
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April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see Naruto take a second shot at Ibara, and maybe since she's already been "injected" by him, she finds herself feeling strangely different towards him for some reason. I'd also love to see him go for Yuka Yamanaka, possibly awake, using maybe a new power from his smoke that could wake itself up anytime now that would enable him to put others into a seemingly drug-induced haze while planting suggestions into their minds - all without leaving any detectable traces should anyone go poking around in the victim's head afterwards.
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April 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay for additional porn! Yay for additional plot! Three cheers for the author!!
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March 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for Tayuya!