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great chapter, this is one of my fav stories on here. i hope sakura gets a long session and tsunade too.

Awesome!!! please update soon!!! can you considered the next Kunoichis for Naruto Sex-mate? Yuhi Kurenai, Terumi mei (The Mizukage), Samui, Tsunade and Hotaru Tsuchigumo?

Great chapter and good story so far, hope Hana becomes a regular partner for him, if not part of the pairing if there is any

It's been a long time since I've visited the Naruto section on this website. Most fics I read here are terrible but this... is utter genius.

I quite enjoyed the NaruHina and the NaruIno scenes as well as the one with Hana. There should be more of those with girls his age. Sakura and Fu... Tho it does seem you're chosing the girls in a somewhat chronological order!

Hope to see a Naru/Hina scene where she's awake. That would be all kinds of sexy and Hinata's quite the pervert in your fic! GOOD STUFF! :D

Ahhhh, this story is a fresh breath of air in a rather stale and yaoi infested area of AFF.
I have also enjoyed your works "Amoral and Amorous" and "The secret Technique" great works of prevy art they are, I come around to look for updates every few days, and its always wonderful where there are a few new chapters to enjoy.
Great work, and i hope you keep up your high level of quality, i would ask for more chapters, but whenever an author does speed their production up, the quality just starts to fade more and more as they go along. Don't fall into that trap, and keep making consistently good chapters, rather than faster. You're better than that.

you lied too us, you said that we'd get to see some femmeHaku!!!
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but this was okay. great even. in addition, I myself would not would not be adverse to a male NaruHaku or any other NaruYaoi trysts, provided that NAruto was the seme. There's too many Naru-Uke fics, and they don't really fit canon Naruto's characterization, or that of your version either.

Well that was a great chapter the way naruto learned about haku being a he was to funny. Im guessing the smoke/whether naruto uses it on women or not before he has sex with them makes them see him in a higher standing if what just happen with the fox and her calling him naruto-sama. Can't wait to see either tenten and/or karin next maybe the forset of death for karin (and maybe kin if he can) and tenten before the event with him getting some ninja gear. With him trying to apologize to hinata i think either after her fight with neji and she is in the hospital or right before his match in the final would be his best bet, but that is just my thoughts.

So Ive enjoyed this story pretty well and I do enjoy your writing style as it somewhat PWP. It's not completely about the smut and the backstory adds a little bit of definition to the story however there are a couple details that kind of put me off a bit. Those being that you gave Naruto this power of his and you incorporated it well into the first couple of chapters however the couple of others that you have done Recently don't really include the use of said power in the smut parts which is a little disappointing. The one with Hana almost feels like it should have been part of The Secret Techniques series rather than this one just cause it was more of a semi-consensual/bribery style chapter. What I'm trying to convey is I feel that this story should be more focused on the sleep distraction mist element of the story in the smut parts as I feel it keeps continuity in the story a bit stronger. All in all however you are the author so you will ultimately write how you like and I really just wanted to give my honest opinion of your story. Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing more chapters soon.

So glad to see this story up and running again. Still, kinda hoped she would tell him to unleash the beast and give Inari a little brother or sister. Nice Chapter. Look forward to the next. All though if as I assume your going straight to the chunin exams ... there are so many targets Naruto could have in the forest ... so many.

Okay, that was totaly worth the wait. The foxes laat comment was a bit ominus, but i can live with a bit of drama. Im also able enough to tell the difference betweel real life and fanfiction that slavery isnt going to stop me from reading such an awsome story. If your taking votes on who the next girl will be, put another one down for karin. I dont have a problem with tenten, but shes just a bit of a bland character. karin is much more fun to play with and we know shes a natural sub. Just my thoughts on it. Cant wait for the next chapter of any of your three storys. Keep up the awsome work!