rate_review Reviews

I love this so far. I can honestly say that your Naruto's personality is one of the better, if not best, I've seen as of yet. I also quite enjoy that this has an interesting story behind the smut scenes. Please keep up the great work.

This error created some disturbing images that really destroyed my boner
preventing his cock from entering his throat - preventing his cock from entering her throat
(and something that might be an error, since it's something that was applied so to speak, a verb form would make more sense)
spit-slick flesh - spit-slicked flesh

On another note, I'm not the biggest fan of Naruto/Fem!Haku, in most of the stories I've read Haku is a guy, which creates a bit of dissonance.

I'm just holding out for the loli. An OC would be pretty cool- I'd love to see the background that would lead to him taking one.

after reading ur story i loved the hinata and ino chapters not so much the 3rd one tho while i understand the need for revenge and all that... you would figure he would hit closer to home like sakura and other girls in his class... and i was kinda hopeing if u go to wave with this sotry u could do a fem haku lol i am also wondering if u will do repeates like hinata or ino... after say he finds out if they did or use the jutsu he could have more fun that way... u will run outa girls if u stick with just one at a time.... personaly im a fan of hinata haku fu.... and i am curious if he will do naruko and clone jutsu on some of his.... victims btw how often do u update this site dont let me have it were they send emails

Dude, this story is great. Take as long as you want to update dude the Hana chapter was awesome and Fem!Haku sounds awesome

Lol i really like the stories behind the sex. Now I can't stop wondering who else will naruto bed. Great job as per usual!

Good chapter. Love the way you set up this chapter and even set up the next chapter bringing up Wave and giving Naruto something extra to do while he's there. Looking forward to seeing what you do with Wave and how many women he hooks up, knocks up, and just plain screws while he's there.

Back to this chapter love that this technically has an alibi since this was his 'first' time. I hope they hook up again the future ... maybe even Hana brags about his 'healing' powers to a few friends or something. Lots of possibilities.

Although now that he's a ninja I am interested in his other skills and how they progress maybe how his thievery and indulging in his new habit helps his ninja career, but I get that is a different story.

wish the naruto x hana would be long way parring...

Well that was a awesome chapter glad how he got hana boy I wonder what would happen if kiba found out LOL looking forward to wave cause hey tazuna's daughter could help "pay" for the mission even though naruto would be killing gato in wave thus getting his money train back

Pretty writing to go with some pretty good smut.
Can't wait to see more