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August 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I thought this chapter was a bit underwhelming. Maybe it's because I really like Hinata, but I felt like the chapter was too short and that it should have been longer with more focus on Hinata. Maybe you could use her again sometime later?
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August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good to see Kurotsuchi finally in the harem. Judging by your comment at the end, I'm guessing Hinata's next? Should be good, though I'm wondering who'll you add next. Maybe a threesome with Kurenai and Anko?
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August 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is like Chinese knockoff of TheLemonSage's Eroninja but much more pathetically done.
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August 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, hope we see some girls come back in future chapters
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August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Put Shiho, Hana, Yugao and Yoshino in the harem.
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July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I'm actually working on something similar, though it starts earlier in the series, and uses a different method for Sasuke to gather his harem, so it's nice to have a story that can help my inspiration. Looking forward to more!
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July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if you're going to add say Hinata using her infatuation with Naruko. Or maybe the milfs like Tsume (dominate the bitch), Yoshino Nara, Hinata's and Ino's mothers, and Mebuki.
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July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hey man added fuu and Yugito
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July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good chapter. You've been improving, this chapter didn't have as many grammatical mistakes as before and the chapter flowed better in general. I'm assuming that Konan will scout Kurotsuchi, which should be a nice addition to the harem.
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July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
how did he gain the rinnegan in a few days? It took Madara decades for his body to incorporate Hashirama's DNA into every cell. With a weaker Senju (along with a weaker bloodline) how did it not only happen faster but faster by a few dozen orders of magnitudes? For a biological equivalent, it would be a like a human woman giving birth to 2000 babies in a month.