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Really? I can understand Sasuke is not a very popular character. Hell I hate him myself and for the record I can't stand Naruto. But this story is decent at the most, I find it hard to believe that over 700 rated this low. Please if your going to rate a story, rate it for the content, author's writing skills, etc. NOT BECAUSE IT A CHARACTER YOU HATE. Hell, I hate Naruto but you don't see me putting hundreds of low rating on those do you? So rate a story on it's merits that what a TRUE reader does.

I think there's something weird going on, everytime I come to this site, it seems like this has received 50 new ratings and judging by the way the rating changes, I assume they're all 1 ratings. I think someone's spamming ratings to get this a lower rating.

I'm liking this, but could you have it so the girls don't practically disappear after their chapter? It's weird how Konan, for example, hasn't done anything since she joined the harem. I'd like to see more interactions between the harem members, too.

Hey there. I'm glad you read my last review. As for your threesome writing, I wouldn't say it's "bad" perse. The "problem" is merely its length. When writing threesomes, some author's find it harder to focus on the littler details that they might add when it's only a "twosome". In the previous chapter, you focused a lot on Sasuke's thoughts in Kyuubi's section (how Kyuubi's a bijuu, or how Kushina was his future concubine), rather than on the sex itself. In Kushina's section, you did a better job with the focus on sex, which is why it's "longer" than Kyuubi's section. It sometimes can be hard to, "divide" the time between different partners in a threesome, but that's more experience than anything. As it stands, you did a good job transitioning between Kushina and Kyuubi. Next time, you could try finding a balance between Sasuke's thoughts and the sex itself, instead of feeling obligated to include all members at all times. If you find this hard, you can did what you did last chapter, and have a girl knocked out, or something to keep her "out of the action". Sorry if this sounds a little too criticizing. Of course, you can read other lemons for reference, which can help too. Good Luck. (P.S., will you ever include Kyuubi again?)

hey put ice queens means Kurenai, anko and yuugao in Sasuke harem

Bring Tsume and Yoshino as Milf example added in Sasuke hare,

Bring Tsume and Yoshino as Milf example added in Sasuke hare,

Hey can you put this stories on ficwad.

how about one wiht kurenai still pregrant or tsume if you could add scenes with Lactation, my brother is interested in tose

Great next we need anko or ino, or perhaps one of the inuzuka like Hana of tsume