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June 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good chapter. I have a question, though. Are you planning on adding more foreign kunoichi after Sasuke arrives in Konoha?
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May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Would like to see a Sasuke/Naruko/Hinata chapter
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May 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter , i hope Naruto is one of his conquests...fem naruto getting dominated by sasuke is always nice.
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May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking the way you're updating so frequently. I'm guessing Konan's next, right? After visiting Amegakure, I hope that you have Sasuke meet another kunoichi during his return trip back to Konoha. Someone like Kurotsuchi or Temari, perhaps?
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May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Will you also include Kurostuchi from Iwagakure
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May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Add Samui, Konan,Matsuri and Karui to the harem.
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May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, interesting so far. There could be a few interesting ways to improve the story though. For instance, turn Naruto to his side, subtly using his EMS to make him believe that what Sasuke is doing is right.
Also, since he is not going in his mad quest for revenge, then he has no reason to hate Naruto, maybe he could even feel honoured by his loyalty, and trade cells with him to awaken the rinnegan in them both. That could also be a unique occasion to show an evil Naruto instead of the usual goody-two-shoes. Have Naruto hidding behind a mask of niceness while he only wants to get back at the villagers.
Then he could ask for Sasuke to help him create his own harem, leading to them founding a new clan who's defining trait would be the rinnegan. That would make the brother relationship take a new turn, wouldn't it?
The only thing I ask, if you pick my idea, is to please make Hinata a part of Naruto's harem.
Also, since he is not going in his mad quest for revenge, then he has no reason to hate Naruto, maybe he could even feel honoured by his loyalty, and trade cells with him to awaken the rinnegan in them both. That could also be a unique occasion to show an evil Naruto instead of the usual goody-two-shoes. Have Naruto hidding behind a mask of niceness while he only wants to get back at the villagers.
Then he could ask for Sasuke to help him create his own harem, leading to them founding a new clan who's defining trait would be the rinnegan. That would make the brother relationship take a new turn, wouldn't it?
The only thing I ask, if you pick my idea, is to please make Hinata a part of Naruto's harem.
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May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Going to get his own Rinnegan, eh? If that is the case then Konan won't stand a chance.
As an idea after he hypnotizes Konan, he could accidentally summon the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path when he tries out his Rinnegan and discovers he can control it since he is an Uchiha. When he asks Konan what it does, and discovers that it contains the captured Tailed Beasts he can release them one at a time and hypnotize them into his harem.
As an idea after he hypnotizes Konan, he could accidentally summon the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path when he tries out his Rinnegan and discovers he can control it since he is an Uchiha. When he asks Konan what it does, and discovers that it contains the captured Tailed Beasts he can release them one at a time and hypnotize them into his harem.
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May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Didn't expect you to update so soon. Considering they're close to Kumogakure, maybe you could add Mabui, Samui and Karui to his harem all at once. A foursome would be pretty hot.
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May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Would like to see a Naruko/Kushina chapter, but whatever happens.