rate_review Reviews

hey can you write a sasuke fucking Naruto wife hinata and his mom kushina in frot of Naruto say they love his cock

It's a pretty good story. It's original and decently written and paced. Though I feel the scene where she throws away her wedding ring is a bit too extreme for most people's taste. Moving on after Minato died is one thing but that's just cruel and heartless.

Apart from that you might want to insert a scene break in between the different scenes. Right now there are sentences where you literally jump months ahead in the story without any proper indication that you did so, that is confusing. I don't think there is enough material to justify splitting it up in several chapters, but a few "XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX" in between them would clear things up a lot.

Overal it's a pretty solid story, no spelling errors or grammatical errors either.

People who dislike this have a problem with the pairing rather than the actual quality of the story. 8/10

Fucking terrible

Fucking hot. Sasuke is a fine young stud. We need more SasuKushi oneshots. Ignore the haters. They don't know that Sasuke is one of the best character ever created.

My god this is awesome.there's finally a stor out that doesn't just suck naruto's dick. Instead it's kushina sucking sasuke's dick we need more stories like this