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July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter he got kurenai nice I take it the other genin are 18 to or will they be younger like 13-16? also have fun on your vacation
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July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really fun story, I think that Hinata should go looking for her sensei and be the next addition to the pack
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July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter update soon your English was good will naruto be getting more girls if so can I suggest hinata, ino, tenten, anko, kurenai from the leaf and will he get other girls from the other villages or only 1s from konoha
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July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
for the first chapter its not bad but kind of hard to read u need to space out the paragraphs to make it easy to read other then that nice job for the first story cant wait to see who will be the next lucky girl maybe hana or tsume?
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July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great story