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by Night_Being

person Asphyxiated
schedule October 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I really enjoy your writing. I have to be honest, I didn't have the patience to read the entire thing. I did however skim through some chapters, and I love your style. Keep up the good work :)
schedule October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think they won me over. I wouldn't worry about them being out of character... after all, the situation has taken them so far out of their usual place that it hardly matters. I find their development to be believable enough, and certainly not too fast or arbitrary. I'm rooting for them to make it work! And hoping that Itachi manages to change his plans.