i had an idea for a chapter around march. my idea was that when hinata told naruto what sakura said, he attacks her in a fox-filled rage, and the ONLY one who can calm him down is hinata, kind of like the incredible hulk and betty ross, afterwards, after naruto passed out from chakra exhaustion, he wakes up in a hospital bed with hinata at his bedside. after calming her down, naruto explains exactly what he is, which is the jinchuuriki for the kyuubi no yoko. after the hospital, naruto agrees to mate with hinata. then he helps hinata find her friends. after that, he agrees to go with her to meet her family. there it is, my idea for at least 1 chapter. sorry about not putting this down earlier, but i wasn't sure how to put it, after all, this is an idea for the story, not a demand.
chapters 8 & 9 were great. 9 was a bit of a cliffhanger, though. I can't wait for the next few chapters.
I love this story and can't wait for more. I wish I could write like you I have so many ideas. But alas I'm a story reader not a story writer. I may give it a try one day but until then I'll have this gate story you have written. Thank you for sharing your talents with us 😁
This is One of the best narunna story I've seen on any fanfic site, really can't wait foe you to update.
Nooooo! why id u leave it there?!
This is a very interesting story. One i would love to bury myself into and read over and over again if you decide to put more content in. Your wroting style is very good, minimal errors while being very detailed and keeping the flow of the story at a continous slow rate
Tbh I think u should hurry up telling her naruto she past it's causing so much drama its perminatly hurting there relationship it would also explain his weakness to hinata and the reason he was after Sakura was out of desperation to b loved