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Please use futa instead :D that would be incredibly hot

Aww come on! Please continue this!' >.<

>///< I can't wait for the next part...

This yaoi is NOTING like i would'of imagined! I've read it about three times now and it still hasn't loss value to the shear agony Naruto feels durring all of this. I'd say its one of the best i've ever read. I love it how Hidan is just the badass mother fucker who can yell at the others and get away with it. I bet Pain is just ramming his head against a brick wall at about the time Hidan give them the bird....Just wonderful! >.< Hope to see more of this soon!

A+. I really mean it. The characterizations, the storytelling, the sex. Just superb writing here with attention to detail, and still adhering to a rhythm easy to follow.

Also arousing and stimulating, while still having a depth. You mentioned "syndromes" in the A/N, well there is a definite real psychological character study here too. I love how you portray every single character thus far. And the biggest challenge, Itachi, you just flawlessy stay in character...you make it seem so effortless! And Naruto!

Thanks for sharing and I can't wait for the next part. Would Naruto try to escape? Would he succeed or fail? And if he fails, how will he cope?

So many questions!

I dearly hope you continue! this contrast between each person taking Naruto is amazing!! Your writing style is so good! Really, capturing the emotions Naruto is feeling each and every time is so amazing! Great job! Please tell me if there's more! :D

Wah. Poor naru naru 3 down six more to go. R u going to include pain and konan in this little escapade.

Wow, really good.

Definitely interested in where this is going. I'm also curious as to why what Itachi's motivations for volunteering are, as well as who is going overall. Is Pain going to participate, or will Nagato be stepping in himself? And how about Konan?

I feel pretty bad for Naruto. On one hand, I'd like his suffering to decrease, but on the other hand, I think being treated gently as he's being raped might actually hurt worse.

I am abnormally obsessed with this fanfiction