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April 30, 2018 at 12:00 AM
realy nice , i realy liked the story and the route you chose ( btw naruhina fan ) so i hope hinata is there as the ,,boss wife,, or somting like that ,after the price she paid
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September 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I like your story here and wish for hinata te be a demon too.. A demon that will help Naruto to destroy the village. I hope you will consider it, please.
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October 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope you're coming back to this story soon. It is an excellent story!
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January 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Your descriptions are fantastic! I was disapointed that you didn't show Naruto taking Ayame's anal cherry though. Please write more songs! :)
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January 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just wonder if one council person breaches the contract if everyone is punished. I'll assume no but think that should be cleared up. But good intro
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January 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Why did you let this die even though it sucks that Hinata is dead this is a good story I insist you continue with it.
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December 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to more!!
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December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Happy with Hinata's suicide, I can't stand her. The plot is fresh and I like the new, improved Naruto, he is much better than retarded Naruto
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October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is the second Hinata suicide I can remember reading. You wrote it out better. I actually like Hinata as a character both her shy self and her confident self. Since you seem to be using the Western concepts of Hell, will Naruto have Hinata as his slave, since she would be in hell for suicide?
doe-eyed blond in the desert from one of the more obscure worlds he’d conquered. He’d had fun with him and those two prince brothers.
What is that from?
Please continue this!
doe-eyed blond in the desert from one of the more obscure worlds he’d conquered. He’d had fun with him and those two prince brothers.
What is that from?
Please continue this!
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September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter I saw he said 1st wife in this realm I wonder just how many wives he has glad he got ayame I wonder what she will say when she finds out who he really is