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April 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting. Like the way you're building the world and suspense.
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April 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM
The way Ibiki and Iruka dealt with rejection was an interesting counterbalance. Ibiki leaving town to clear his head, and Iruka locking himself away, both searching for strength. Well done
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October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lovely job setting up the world and the mood. This is going to be a fun story even without the snogging, I think, and I just know your hard work setting things up here will pay off. By the way, is the Hyuuga victim supposed to be Hanabi or someone we know, or just a nameless member of the household?