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December 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love what you've done here! A truly amazing and unique work of art! I eagerly await the next chapter to see how a newly broken hinata will help with the other two. I see its been a while since you last updated, but i hope this isnt abandoned all together. Far too many wonerfull storys like this seem to start off with a hiss and a roar, only to die off and be left untouched for years. Please dont let this be another one. Its too briliant, descriptive, well written and smutty to just leave us hanging, waiting for more! Please drop us another chapter in time for chrismas, i beg of you!
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May 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
very hot, wow! wonder if there's more and who the mysterious guy was, though i have my guesses...
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November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i like it-can't wait for the next chapter.
waiting for the tenten chapter( she is the best :) )
waiting for the tenten chapter( she is the best :) )
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story update soon!
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October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Nicely paced, don't reveal who the villan is(though I can guess) not a straight up raunch-fest and you spreading it over several chapters.