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December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm incredibly excited for this story. I hope to see more soon! Even though you stated that there won't be much plot to this story I do like a bit of drama, so long as you keep the pure sexiness that you have already established. Can't wait for more, from both this story and your others.
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December 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
How about making Haku "A Rare One" when going into the Wave Mission, so Naruko isn't so alone?
Also he/she could use his/her Ice-Bloodline to make an Ice-Strapon, Ice-Dildos, or in other Kinky ways.
And will Naru-(to/ko)'s Three Little Admirers (Konohamaru/Moegi/Udon) make any appearances?
Also will Hinata's Little Sister Hanabi be in your Fanfic? And will Hinata be Shy, Not so Shy, or maybe Not Shy at All?
Also he/she could use his/her Ice-Bloodline to make an Ice-Strapon, Ice-Dildos, or in other Kinky ways.
And will Naru-(to/ko)'s Three Little Admirers (Konohamaru/Moegi/Udon) make any appearances?
Also will Hinata's Little Sister Hanabi be in your Fanfic? And will Hinata be Shy, Not so Shy, or maybe Not Shy at All?
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November 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
considering they would still need to make the soup to cook the noodles and other ingredients the cum ramen should be more expensive since it takes extra time and effort added on to make.
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November 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love the smut but you should make a chapter on naruko taken by the villagers
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November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Switch them, but make Hinata a suppressed dom that is unleashed with Naruko. Just having sex gets stale so there needs to be a bit of spice added in to keep it good.
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November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
switch sakura for she is useless.
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November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I read the end there,and well it really killed the mood of the story. It was rather sad at the end there.
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November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good, but you should give a bit more detail on some of the small things. Like the size of their dicks, it's more/less erotic to know if she's getting railed by someone who's well endowed or taking it from a small one.
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November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I know you said that this was porn without plot, but that little speech at the end where Naruko describes her position in life, that seemed a bit too messed up and serious for this. And it has basically killed my mood for this story.
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November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
MOAR MOAR MOAR
We need futa. This place is a swarm of Yaoi and abuse fics. Give us more of the good stuff man!
We need futa. This place is a swarm of Yaoi and abuse fics. Give us more of the good stuff man!