rate_review Reviews

Awesome story. Great writing.

Really great fic. I always have second thoughts about incest, but you made it so hot and somehow "natural". I liked the pace - making the reader savor every moment just like Itachi. The way you depict Sasuke as "bottom" is very appealing to me. He's submissive but rather to his pleasure than to a person... and he still has his attitude, just the way I've always imagined him in yaoi pairings. You've also pictured him like that in Controversy which I enjoyed a lot! The SasNar you wrote I liked the least, Idk, almost always lacks tension in SasNar and you didn't avoid that - or maybe I just see it this way... Anyway after the other two fics I'll look forward for more of your writing.

That was HOT! Nicely done and loved the initial angst of Itachi just not being able to admit his feelings to his little brother. Glad he managed to get over it ^_-.