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HEY....WHERE'S CHAPTER 3.....THE STORY IS VERY GOOD.

I was all for this until you had them agree to an open relationship. What the hell? And then you have Sasuke defending Naruto like they really care about each other which doesn't mesh with how okay he is with letting Naruto fuck other people. 

Also you wrote that Sasuke had never been with anyone before and then said he had been with several women. 

There's just a lot of inconsistencies for the sake of being 'edgy' and 'provocative.'