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May 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written and very intense. you make both characters feel strong and vulnerable at the same time, wow! i also loved the humour at the end :) hope there will be more!
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February 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy. I liked the smut and the bit of plot that's building which made the story more than pointless PWP. Good luck with your fic!
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February 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
that was dam fun. and so much JOKES on her behalf.
does add some interesting context to well everything but seriously SO MANY people would want to kill Sasuke EVEN MORE now I mean Garra and Shikamaru or...
and hwo does the Hinata thing work? because neji death and bonding and....
confusion. SO MUCH.
still the funny stuff here with them getting in trouble for being so distracted all the time and HAHAHAHAHAHA
nice stuff here, truly even though so much stuff doesn't translate to just keep it canon ...
does add some interesting context to well everything but seriously SO MANY people would want to kill Sasuke EVEN MORE now I mean Garra and Shikamaru or...
and hwo does the Hinata thing work? because neji death and bonding and....
confusion. SO MUCH.
still the funny stuff here with them getting in trouble for being so distracted all the time and HAHAHAHAHAHA
nice stuff here, truly even though so much stuff doesn't translate to just keep it canon ...
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February 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really well written. I like how their vulnerabilities are presented. There's a power struggle between these two, without getting over the top, in a very real sense, and it was pretty sexy to read I'm excited for more! I wonder if you are taking requests...I'd like to see this Naruto 'dominate' more!