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for Beautiful Liars

by Quetzal

person juk
schedule October 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
think you can make a naruitasasu or make this where naruto is the badass dominant and make both of them his bitches because i havent found one of those and i cant really find naruita fics because we need more dom naru
person smint45
schedule October 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far although the chapters a so short I can't say much jet!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!
schedule June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good so far. As for the maid I guess it all depends on how you want to portray Itachi. It could go one of two ways. You have him feel her out and go the good guy route in order to have and ally on the staff or just right out intimidate her and just have her fearful of him.
person Kyid
schedule March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind but make it quick

I want lemons!
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I totally want to see him intimidate the poor maid. I love Itachi and he can be soooo sweet and so terrifying. I'm so into this story.
schedule February 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
^_^ This'll be good.