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Well things seem to be heating up i wonder if naruto will save the hokage or just grab hinata and the others and leave

That last chapter is shit. Using that bloody super-sharingan control crap is a story killer period. The sharingan is bad enough in cannon, but that one in plain ridiculous and was a miserable creation. Daring to use it is worse. I loved that story, now I hate it. Congratulation!!! (that was sarcasme in case you didn't get-it)

Well, that last chapter was damn disapointing. It was the inclusion of the deus ex machina in the form of Shisui's sharingan that ruined it.

Really, an unblockable way to make someone follow your will unconditionally and that works on everybody? Fucking stupid.
Bad enough that canon has the normal sharingan be able to everything the user needs, and has it trump bijuu's conciousness even when it's not rinnegan or even mangekyou, but Shisui's eye takes the cake; it's totally broken for no explained reason and so comes across as an extremely cheap copout.

Including it here the way you did really brings the story down; even if the situation gets resolved somehow it is still bad and unnecessary.
And the huge diversion from 'normal' with so many now dead really makes no damn sense the way it was described here. As in, there is no pressing reason for Danzo and he's basically telling everyone "Come at me, bro!". And Naruto will suffer more for it than he already did. *Sigh* and it looked so promising.

Also, the whole chapter makes non-Danzo-aligned Konoha appear borderline retarded, at least lobotomized. Just like canon. Two important figures vanish and nobody notices or reacts? Danzo has extensive personnel and infrastructure and can go about his sinister business unmolested? WTF?

Dam this is not looking goood for naruto glad you updated and cant wait to see what happens next. either way even if all the blames goes to danzo naruto will not be getting of the hook so easy

I truly love this series its a complete reverse take on the Naruto universe. Don't you dare stop writing :P

ok so danzo kicked nap naruto i wonder what is going to happen here is hoping naruto kills most if not all is root

How is Inari alive?

overwhelming manpower then; is it simply for

will there be a Tsunami lemon?

Let me guess the need for the Sharingan is too great an ‘asset’ to throw away right?”
…how is it being thrown away when it would be being used for mass production?

idiot Naruto probably got arrested for the monster he is.” Sakura boasted
why has she gone 180 from wave?

If you can why don’t you tell him?” Naruto said nodding his chin towards Sasuke
What truth?

Why is Kakashi against Naruto?

Were the Elders killed for treason?

I will give a more through review later but this is it for now.

What the hell? I clicked on this story thinking it looked good. And I was right. It was good. So I kept reading and it stayed good. Then I got to the last chapter and out of nowhere the story is suddenly loaded with cliches. I'll wait for the next chapter before I pass judgment but if this is the direction you're going I'm not sticking around.

Nice chapter i wonder if the hokage lied to naruto to stop if from freaking out and if so does he still believe in naruto or is he against him to? i wonder if naruto will help either sakura or sasuke when orchimaru attacks I for one hope he doesn't.

Very interesting. I'm surprised the Hokage hadn't tried to talk to him about what he found out and of course the Uchiha. I'm very interested to find out what Mr.Teamwork is going to do about Sasuke ... if anything or if he sweeps it under the rug and forces Naruto to work with the psycho.

By the way nice working in what happened during the massacre as the explained a lot.