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for Special Training Indeed

by enifoot

person Bageltiger
schedule June 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is so great please, please update soon.
person Bageltiger
schedule June 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
God I love this story, it is just so hot. But please update this story soon.
schedule June 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
When's the next update coming
person ina
schedule June 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to update? Been waiting a month now.
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love story. Want more.
schedule May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story premise. I really like how you are actually having Jiraiya slowly seduce her instead of just straight out taking her. Could you also have Jiraiya several years ago back before the Kyuubi attack enjoy a threesome with Kushina and Mikoto. I do not mean he should be Naruko's father or anything like that but I would like it if in the past he had enjoyed her mother, Kushina servicing him whenever Minato wasn't around. Basically I think it would be cool if Jiraiya compared Naruko to Kushina in his mind as he seduces and trains her.
schedule May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very nice,you intend to do other male and female character?
schedule May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, do love the premise and hope you update soon. Maybe have Naruko be joined by some other girls afterwards. Make Jiraiuya some kind of harem master :) I do love the thought of kinky stuff like say sisters, maybe have naruko use clones?
Keep up the good work.
cheers
Shadeirion
schedule May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM

Please correct your disclaimer.


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person jj
schedule May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
plz write more breed her good