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by mannahpierce

schedule January 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Whenever I start to read a completed work, I never review in the middle. I've never regreted that decision until now. Your story has utterly captivated me. I cannot express how much it affected me, other than to say that I lived this story. I talked with my mom (who lives with me and my husband) about this story and I couldn't keep quiet! This stopped being a fanfiction a long time ago, and yet I was always impressed how you could loop Naruto plotline into your saga. The eulogy, while sad, was the perfect wrap up. We knew there were no "and everyone lived happily ever after" but I think you managed to squeeze every last drop of joy out of the reality of your world. I hope you continued on and wrote your original story. I will do my best to hunt it down, and if I don't find it I'll send you my email so you could send it to me. Thank you so much for sharing your story, I love it.

person JB
schedule January 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I loved your Naruto saga. I almost wish there was more but it was absolutely amazing. Thank you for sharing it.

 

person M
schedule January 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since I've read your space saga and still this epilogue really hit hard. I have to admit I cried a bit. Anyway, thanks for sharing this saga with all of us, the epilogue was very well done.
person Mulle - if you remember
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm crying. Have read everything. Will be back to write a full review, even if you'll never read it. But right now.... emotions.
schedule May 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing an ending. You're saga was what got me hooked on Naruto even though I've never seen one single episode of the anime. I've read many sci-fi novels written by David Eddings to Mercedes Lackey and you are truly an exceptional writer on par with them. I hope you continue writing.
person v
schedule May 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hoped and hoped and hoped....and then you made me cry and cry and cry..but I suppose its alright since rabid fans like myself would of never left your naruto stories unless forced to. I never would of imagined haku with haru and ran but I can see it. I will buy your books..just because you have broken mine and sasuke's heart..I will not punish myself by not reading your wonderful stories..the end. :)
person satterb
schedule May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know, in the 18 months since you completed the Cold of Space saga, I read it all over again. It was as good the second time. Good to hear from you and I plan on shopping for this new fix. Thanks for posting!
person sessha batto
schedule May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I admit it, you made me ugly cry. That is a huge compliment, by the way, as I rarely cry over anything, much less fiction. Thank you.
person melissen (YamanshiOminashiIchinashi)
schedule May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it! I know it's just few words but it's still a blast! An epilogue! And I would love to read about Tsuneo pursuing Shika! But i understand that you have better things to write that fanfics.:) Congratulations on finally reaching your goal! I know how you wanted to do it. I hope some day I will be able to do something like that.
I just want you to know that In the cold of space (and the rest of the saga) was absolutely an art piece, no matter what names the charaters had been given. It was not Naruto. It was your world.

The teaser looks GREAT! I wonder if it's also man x man story, because hinestly I like this kind of stories. I hope I'll find more info on your site.
Good luck with your writing and once again THANK YOU for sharing your vision with us. Thank you for your talent. Thank you for your words.
-melissen
person Procrastination_is_key
schedule May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful! I admit I wanted more but I think that will always be the case. It is a good way to finish the series. There were surprises (Haku and Haru and Ran) as well as futures I expected (Itachi and Kisame). It was bittersweet for Sasuke too but any future would be for him without Naruto. I have really enjoyed reading it and now am looking forward to your new stories. Good luck for the future!