rate_review Reviews

I loved this story so much that I laughed at some chapters. It was a very good story, and I think I love Naruto as a Saiyan the most. It made it a whole lot interesting. And to think that Naruto had all those mates, and all those children. Oh good lord... and I loved how Kyo, Madara and Kabuto were killed in Sakumo's blast when he transformed into a ape. They deserved it. hahah xD I loved how it was a mix between Naruto, Yu Yu Hakusho. It was really good. Keep up the good work! Will there be a sequel? If so then I'd love to read it

Hey, it's me the Grammar Nazi back again... what is it with you and writing potentially awesome stories but riddling them all with the same mistakes? Yeah, anyway, same picks as your other stories. Apart from that, I'm enjoying it. After all, Goku wasn't the only child Saiyan sent out to ravage and conquer. So, a pair of them landing in the Elemental Nations pre recorded history isn't that much of a stretch.

Had to drop you a note....this is my favorite story out of all the stories you've written so far! Keep up the good work!I hope you are going to make more stories like this.

Yet more of your yummy stories? Yes!! Love this chapter. Then again I like all the chapters of this story.

Please update soon, this is a very interesting story, I really want to see how it processes.