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Not a big fan of male on male but did like the plot would like to see this maybe as less manwhores  if you rewrite but hey you do you 

Hi love I was not going to  review till I read all of your stories but this one just stopped. Was there more? Would love it if you have time to finish it, please. Love them and you. I know crazy fangirl but can't help it your awesome. 

This is an amazingly well done story! Ive never read anything like it! I hope The next chapter is published soon, i'd like to see how this ends! Completely original take, amazing job! <3

Wow a loyalty seal. I never would have guessed that. With his easy going demeanor I would just think Minato was a wimp.

She was so horrible and I'm actually glad that she put a seal on Minato... it gives a reason for him being such a dupe. Oh and please please please don't go with that incest theme you added to your warnings. Naruto already has enough sex without adding his dad to the mix. That would be too horrible for words and those themes belong with the bad guy of a story... definitely not Naruto and Minato.

Ok i came here for the porn but the plot is admittedly a+

this is really awesome...hope you update soon...cuz im impatient for this story to continue since it has my favorite mix in it,,,yaoi sex aand a plot with a really fanastic twist actually....kushina is so dead...man i would like to see if you make an incest without kushina being in there....it will be awesome.. hope you updatesoon...good luck

I've been so busy that I missed several chapters & was able to read several at once which was awesome :) I loved loved loved these last several chapters. I am so glad that Naruto and Minato found out that Naruto is his missing son (and very glad that happened before Naruto tried to hit on Minato). And I love how the plot is progressing. It was especially nice that you focused on the plot rather than just the sex scenes. The flirty innuendo kind of stuff is actually more interesting when it is used to tease and lead into a sex scene between characters rather than getting right into it which comes across as rather hoe-ish on Naruto's part. He could have slept with some really awful people because he seemed to be ok sleeping with anyone and everyone. I like the people he did sleep with but it would have been nice to have more of a liking for them rather than just a booty call. Anyway, off topic... I love the tattoo bat and lizard spies but wonder who saw them leave the tattoo shop several chapters ago. And that female babysitter who was trying to kidnap Naruto's sister... she so needs to get busted. I think you did a really great job with Naruto finding out who he was with the picture and the scene where he gives his dad a tatto and Minato realizes it was him. It was really well done how you led up to it with thoughts from Minato about how Naruto looks like him, how he was a bit embarrassed hearing about Naruto sleeping with his friends, just everything. Very awesome. I know there are more things that stood out to me that were wonderfully done but I really am going on and on here lol. Hope you are inspired to write more soon!

i don't have much to say besides the fact that i really love this story. i mean i love all of your works but this one is one of my favorites.

Nice. Very nice, but there is one hole in the story. If every room has silencing seals as you said before, how did they hear the glass and Sasuke? Other than that nagging thought, this was a very good chapter.