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by intricateorchid

schedule March 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

More please!

person Huni
schedule April 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Man, this story is my favorite that I've read! It does a great job with the BDSM scenes, and I would love to read more. I'm doing my best to keep this readable, but holy hot sticks, this is such a great story! I can't think of enough adjectives to properly describe this. My only problem is that there isn't more! I keep checking this story regularly because of how well it is written. There's no parts where I think, "oh, that could have been done better." I'm just left with this giddy awe of not only the words used, but the content of it is and how well representative it is of the BDSM community. Please oh please keep writing, I just love this story so much!!
person h fb uh JJ
schedule September 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
When will you update the story it is quite good
person Lonelylulaby
schedule August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story while browsing, and I gotta say, it was wonderful. I felt kinda bad for Sasuke in this last chapter cause he feels like he's getting left behind by Naruto and Sakura. It's like he's emotionally stunted in certain areas. Poor little tink tink. Can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person asalea
schedule June 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's cool to have background story, sasuke seems more human. Im looking forward the next chapter!
person Kays3r
schedule June 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Cannot wait for the update.
schedule June 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm into this. I'm writing several BDSM stories and I'm very interested in how others write the scene, so I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
person asalea
schedule June 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Naruto fandom counts few of good bdsm fanfics, Im glad you started it like this. Sasuke is in character and I laughed how he marked sex as his limit, its so him! I hope you will continue. Thanks for sharing :)